Revise a Draft Presentation Day The only day Taylor disliked at school was student presentation day. Every year, students were required to create a fifteen-minute presentation to share with the whole class on presentation day. Most students looked forward to this day after spending weeks planning and preparing. Taylor, however, dreaded this day because she was always wortied about messing up a word or skipping a part of her poster. At most, she would mumble through and get it over with. This year, however, was different. Taylor had chosen a topic that she felt passionate about: dogs. Her poster organized her favorite dogs by size, and the pictures were big and beautiful. When Taylor stepped to the front of the class on presentation day, she spoke loudly and clearly. The presentation was interesting, and the pictures popped on the poster. As she finished her speech, the class clapped and told Taylor how great her presentation was. Taylor could not find words as her eyes glistened with tears. From then on, Taylor knew that she didn't need to be afraid of presentation day as long as she loved the topic she wanted to share. 7 Read the following sentence from the second paragraph. This year, however, was different. Which of the following revisions would make this sentence more specific? A. However, Taylor had a different sort of presentation day. B. However, she did end up getting through the presentation. C. This year, however, changed everything for years to come. D. This year, however, was a different presentation for Taylor. Reset Submit