DIARY ENTRIES Your uncle/aunt has decided to treat you to a shopping trip to purchase clothing for your birthday. Write TWO diary entries expressing how you felt BEFORE and AFTER your shopping trip. The two entries combined must be between 80 to 100 words. Do not include the day and date and the salutation (Dear Diary) in your word count. - Use a mind map to plan your two entries. - Then write a draft of the text using ideas from your mind map. - Edit the draft by correcting any spelling, grammar, punctuation, and format errors. Write your final version of the text.

### Mind Map **Before Shopping Trip:** - Excitement - Anticipation - Nervousness about choices - Thoughts on what to buy - Desire for new clothes **After Shopping Trip:** - Happiness with purchases - Relief from finding good deals - Satisfaction with choices - Memories of fun moments - Looking forward to wearing new clothes --- ### Draft **Before Shopping Trip:** I felt a mix of excitement and nervousness before the shopping trip. I was really looking forward to picking out new clothes for my birthday. I had so many ideas about what I wanted to buy, but I was also worried about making the right choices. Would I find something I loved? The anticipation was thrilling, and I couldn't wait to see what the day would bring. **After Shopping Trip:** After the shopping trip, I felt incredibly happy! I found some amazing clothes that I absolutely love. It was such a relief to find great deals and make choices I was proud of. The day was filled with fun moments, and I can't wait to wear my new outfits. Overall, it was a fantastic experience that made my birthday feel even more special. --- ### Final Version **Before Shopping Trip:** I felt a mix of excitement and nervousness before the shopping trip. I was really looking forward to picking out new clothes for my birthday. I had so many ideas about what I wanted to buy, but I was also worried about making the right choices. The anticipation was thrilling, and I couldn't wait to see what the day would bring. **After Shopping Trip:** After the shopping trip, I felt incredibly happy! I found some amazing clothes that I absolutely love. It was such a relief to find great deals and make choices I was proud of. The day was filled with fun moments, and I can't wait to wear my new outfits. Overall, it was a fantastic experience that made my birthday feel even more special.